Carnivore Valley
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Carnivore Valley

READING AGE 16+

Gert Hendrik Suspense/Thriller

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"You uppity fokkin bitch!" Arno yelled getting the lock off and threw the doors open, to everyone's relief there was a vehicle in there, but it was the oldest one they saw so far, and brown with dust.
"Shit! This thing won't f*****g start!" Bison yelled as they went for the pickup anyway, they jumped in coughing from the dust but the vehicle suddenly bounced making them freeze again.
"Nobody move..." Bison said.
"It's not like we fokkin can! There's no key in the fokkin ignition!" Arno said checking the inside.
The vehicle bounced again and they swallowed, this thing, this Giganotos was much, much heavier, much larger than they anticipated, the large paw came down in front of the car bay they sat in, it was in the jungle right behind the gas station, if they were to have continued, they would have walked right into it.
"It, it was an ambush..." Helga whispered.
"How can you be so sure?" Genevieve asked.
"We followed zhat first one, it veered off into the wind... Zhis is a different one!" Helga said in her whisper but twitched when the giant paw lifted away from the ground, when it set down they bounced again.
"No wonder Rebecca don't bother with these buildings, the sheer tremors of these things will shake the building apart!" Arno whispered but Genevieve slapped him.
They heard it rumble, and the sniffs it took by the front of the building.
"It's gonna find us!" Bison said.
"I need a knife!" Arno said and Genevieve drew out a large hunting knife.
"It's too big! Where the fok did you even hide that!?" He said.
Helga reached over and flipped a smaller knife open in front of him, he took it, rammed it into the ignition and attempted to start it.
The engine literary sounded like it was calling the thing outside 'tshou tsi tshou tshou' It went and Arno stopped feeling a shrill run up his spine and his heart drop to his gut, he was just short of crapping himself.
They heard the Giganotos grunt, it clearly heard that attempt at the engine, another paw stepped down and they bounced once again.
"Try again mallcop! f**k try again!"
"Ringing a fokkin dinner bell here Genevieve!"
"We all gonna die!" Bison wailed but the engine roared to life, Arno had it in first gear and planted the gas.
"Out and left Arno! Out and left!" Bison screamed as they spun out of the garage and turned around the building.
Now for the first time they could take a good look a the this gigantic meat eater, it was a dark brown almost black, it didn't have a set pattern over it's hide like a Trex does, but it's head huge and full of teeth just as a Trex none the less.
The Giganotos twitched when it saw the vehicle suddenly fly around it and passed behind it onto the gravel road, it turned and roared after them.
"Fuuuck! We got it's f*****g attention now!" Bison bellowed.
"Keep the gas planted mall cop! Here it f*****g comes!" Genevieve screamed.
It was severely difficult to keep the pickup straight, every time the Giganotos slammed a running claw into the ground the pickup hopped "Fok! This isn't going to fokkin end well!" Arno yelled.

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Tags: dramamysteryambitiousmercenaryhigh-tech worldhorrorESCAPING - Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest 1
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