Can You Forgive Me?

Hey All, I hope you enjoyed this chapter. What are your thoughts on Chiara's mother and father? Did she lose more than one parent that night? I have tried to structure it so that Luca is telling Vincent and Renzo at the same time that Federico told Chiara to avoid overlap, but is Vincent's reaction something you might be interested in as a bonus chapter at the end? I think the big question in this chapter is, should Federico be forgiven? The death of Barone's mother would have happened when Chiara was a school age, so it would have been at least four years later. I can't wait to read your thoughts, I think this chapter has had the most content editing so it wouldn't all dialogue so your responses would be really useful for how to structure any future works. Have a wonderful day, best wishes from May x