Ryan

My lovely readers...give it to me straight. What do you think of this story so far. I'm feeling a huge disconnect from my characters, and I don't know why. Maybe I'm still too connected with Elizabeth and Matteo (from the Mafia Boss' Clueless Nanny, which I'm finishing tomorrow or definitely the Thursday), or did I not give these two enough of a backstory? More information is coming on Grayson's connection to Hayden and what happened in high school, but please, give me your honest opinion. What do you feel is missing from the story? Or are you liking it so far? I'm really struggling for the first time.Oh, just a heads up, this is going to be a shorter one. Probably only 50 chapters max.