Chapter : 26. Humans party..

Hello everyone. Already 26 chapters done. But the comments are very low on this story. Why aren't you making any comments? Tell me about what you think about the story? Where I am making mistakes? How can I fix the problems to make it a better story? One of my readers recently informed me that I am dragging the story too much. I am thankful of her to inform me that mistake. I will try to not do the same thing from now on. I need all of your feedbacks to become a better writer. Won't you help me grow? Thank you all so much for reading my books. I really appreciate your support.